I Saw a Human

mimpi
I eyed on him
His eyes, lips, eyebrows, his face
I saw deceit and dagger looks
I saw an ogre

I eyed on him
His eyes, lips, eyebrows, his face
I saw love, compassion, harmony
I saw an angel

I eyed on him
His eyes, lips, eyebrows, his face
I saw scorn, vulnerability, disbelief, cynicism
I saw a human.

Published by mimpi

Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest.  View profile

'It has become appallingly obvious that our technology has exceeded our humanity."

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  • Dina Quirion5/19/2009

    I love the way you see things, good one...:o)

  • Kofi Bofah12/9/2008

    Feelings are what personify the individual.

  • Nikki12/9/2008

    fantastic work!

  • Kristie Leong M.D.9/28/2008

    Very succinct and thought provoking. You have a wonderful way with words.

  • Lonnette Harrell9/21/2008

    I guess all of us are part ogre and part angel at times. Good work!

  • Chelle9/17/2008

    great work!

  • mayka9/16/2008

    A very beautiful poem

  • Teresa Mahieu9/9/2008

    wonderful, you see much and share much. Loved it!!!

  • Sofya Blinder8/30/2008

    How beautiful!

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA8/30/2008

    Very nice and very much thought provoking ! Wonderful mimpi, just perfect.

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