I Slept with a Spider

Aftermath of Divorce

Theresa Wiza
Velvet warm embrace

Secure

Snuggled dreams

Until the attack

Swift

Vicious

Poisonous wound

Wrapped in a web

Of deceit

But wounds heal

Eventually.

Published by Theresa Wiza

Surviving breast cancer. Winner of FIRST EVER Writer's Digest Script Notes Spinoff Contest. Spiritual, creative, compassionate, inventive. Lots of children & grandchildren who are all the loves of my life....  View profile

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  • Danielle Olivia Tefft12/22/2009

    This poem captures powerful, raw emotion and pain. Well done!

  • Dan Reveal8/26/2009

    I agree with Tonya. Wonderful!

  • T. Hillukka8/1/2009

    Wow. Powerful words..

  • Darrin Atkins7/31/2009

    hope you are doing well

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky7/31/2009

    Wow, this says a lot and delivers maximum emotions in so few words. Well done!

  • Maria Roth7/26/2009

    Great poem! I'm keeping my comments short because I'm sooooooo far behind on my AC reading. (At least, my comment *was* short until I tried to explain why it was so short.) :)

  • Allene Newberg Bilodeau7/25/2009

    Sorry you had to live in a web of illusion, Theresa, but you're a strong survivor from way back. Thank God you got out. And you're right, healing comes in time, if we let it.

  • Charlene Collins7/24/2009

    Ummm duh... sorry.. I now see the subtitle... it is figurative. Very nicely done.

  • Charlene Collins7/24/2009

    Wow! Is that spider real or figurative? Sounds figurative to me...if it is figurative, I can relate. My husband was a spider living in a web of lies. Eventually those wounds do heal.

  • Donald Pennington7/24/2009

    Nicely done. Blogged. Thank you. Make sure when you use your embed code for any piece to copy and paste the correct url into the source for the embed code. That way you're not just taken back to associatedcontent.com...the home page! See ya 'round gurlie.

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