I Weep with You

Rebecca Bardelli

Melancholy tears of salt,

my wish to wash away.

Crystalline tears wash out to sea,

produce relief from pain.


My life has shown me sorrow,

yet now I weep with you.

In your moment of tribulation,

resplendent roses I send your way.


Behold the beauty of nature and sound,

The moon erases encompassing darkness.

The stars are set ablaze,

rain cries in melody extinguishing suffering.


Darkness will vanish,

fog not to prevail.

Continue strong as you endure,

for life is more than just now.

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What is Life About?

Is She Beautiful?

Snow Bride

Haiku: Dream

Tritina: Desiring to Feel a Rush

Published by Rebecca Bardelli - Featured Contributor in Lifestyle and Sports

Rebecca is a freelance writer who is passionate about writing. She has been writing for enjoyment most of her life. She has content published on Yahoo News, Yahoo omg!, and Yahoo Sports. She also took j...  View profile

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  • Delicia Powers10/25/2011

    Inspiring...

  • Nancy P. Goodman, in Tennessee10/16/2011

    very good, thanks!

  • Lorraine Yapps Cohen10/16/2011

    The melancholy of moments do pass, given time. Wonderful poetry of empathy.

  • Stephanie R. Barry10/15/2011

    Yes, Well Done!

  • Jeff DeLuca10/15/2011

    Well done.

  • Lori Gunn10/15/2011

    Awesome work.

  • Kathryn Neff Perry10/15/2011

    Profound..

  • T L Wilson10/15/2011

    Beautiful Rebecca!!

  • Pamela GM Smith10/15/2011

    Beautiful!

  • Peter Flom10/15/2011

    Wonderful poem

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