I Woke Up to Light

mimpi
I woke up to a sunset sun

It was just getting to dark

The darkness I feared forever

This time it was different

I could see through the obscurity

Unlike other times when it felt lost

In a do-not-know-how-to-exist kind of state....

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Wishing you all a blessed and blissful 2009.

Published by mimpi

Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest.  View profile

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  • Dina Quirion5/17/2009

    I love your insight, very powerful... :o)

  • John Smither3/15/2009

    A good deep thought provoking poem!

  • Anonymous2/28/2009

    a day so dark-
    even the owls hoot,
    a night so sparkling-
    even the stars hide.
    A sleep so deep-
    dreams cant break in;
    An awakening so rude
    reality is shattered.

  • Beth Inman2/20/2009

    I love this mimpi..your poetry evokes thought

  • Teresa Mahieu1/14/2009

    Your thoughts run deep child... I love your poetry.

  • Melissa Q1/9/2009

    A am such a fan of your poetry! This one is deep and thoughtful, It just makes me think beyond the surface and try and find what your words are really trying to convey. Great job!

  • SAIVENKAT1/9/2009

    Its good feeling i get when i read your lines, the strangulated thoughts of mine, gets rejuvenated and..my mind tries to add on those lines of yours..

    I fear My Vision through the Obscurity

    Must never turn Obtuse and fade away,

    Like always..

  • Kristie Leong M.D.1/9/2009

    Very deep and thought provoking.

  • Sreenath S Kumar1/8/2009

    nice poem.....

  • Sheryl Young1/7/2009

    Here's to great days in 2009.

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