I woke up to a sunset sun
It was just getting to dark
The darkness I feared forever
This time it was different
I could see through the obscurity
Unlike other times when it felt lost
In a do-not-know-how-to-exist kind of state....
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Wishing you all a blessed and blissful 2009.
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Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest. View profile
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19 Comments
Post a CommentI love your insight, very powerful... :o)
A good deep thought provoking poem!
a day so dark-
even the owls hoot,
a night so sparkling-
even the stars hide.
A sleep so deep-
dreams cant break in;
An awakening so rude
reality is shattered.
I love this mimpi..your poetry evokes thought
Your thoughts run deep child... I love your poetry.
A am such a fan of your poetry! This one is deep and thoughtful, It just makes me think beyond the surface and try and find what your words are really trying to convey. Great job!
Its good feeling i get when i read your lines, the strangulated thoughts of mine, gets rejuvenated and..my mind tries to add on those lines of yours..
I fear My Vision through the Obscurity
Must never turn Obtuse and fade away,
Like always..
Very deep and thought provoking.
nice poem.....
Here's to great days in 2009.