I Would Think of a Title for This Poem but There's No Metaphor for How Much I Miss You

Brandon Elliott
Rain.
Screaming down
my window
Washing away
the

Sound.
Your voice
so clear
replaying
in my

Memory.
Thoughts
filled with
bitter hugs,
reminding me
of

Love.
The only
thing I never
knew
Eating at
my

Heart.
Aching for
your touch
Cascading my
feelings

Forever.
Because I
miss you
and you
don't

Know.

Published by Brandon Elliott

17 Years Young // Writer // Intelligent // Knowledge-Seeking // Poetic Because I Can Be // twitter.com/brandonrofl // brandoniswrite.com //  View profile

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  • Wiley Vaughn12/30/2010

    I'd say try LONESOME, but it's already taken!

  • Ali Canary6/22/2010

    Wonderful imagery--very heartfelt!

  • John Mario1/9/2010

    A poignant poem

  • Crystal Ray12/16/2009

    Very heartfelt poem. Excellent.

  • T. Hillukka12/8/2009

    Wow, this is great.

  • Magena Fawn11/30/2009

    Bravo!

  • Walton S. Tissot11/9/2009

    Well done. Bravo.

  • Tina Twito11/4/2009

    Incredible work! Heart wrenching!

  • John Mario10/31/2009

    A beautiful poignant poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • Mike Hatz10/31/2009

    This is awesome, Brandon! Most excellent job with this!

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