If half so fair a love on earth did dwell,
As dwells within this twice torn heart I bear,
No power known to man could ever quell
Her beauty's bondage, singularly rare.
Oh Cursed love, thou art no friend of mine
Oh wretched man, that walkest thus alone
Enchanted by her magic spells divine
Enraptured by a presence all her own.
My secret love longs fiercely to be known,
As if by standing forth, a victory's won.
Yet somehow knows when known it will succumb,
By light of day its light will be undone.
But glimpsed by half, while evening shadows fall,
My lonely love is standing proud and tall.
As dwells within this twice torn heart I bear,
No power known to man could ever quell
Her beauty's bondage, singularly rare.
Oh Cursed love, thou art no friend of mine
Oh wretched man, that walkest thus alone
Enchanted by her magic spells divine
Enraptured by a presence all her own.
My secret love longs fiercely to be known,
As if by standing forth, a victory's won.
Yet somehow knows when known it will succumb,
By light of day its light will be undone.
But glimpsed by half, while evening shadows fall,
My lonely love is standing proud and tall.
Published by Doug Clore
Doug has a Master's degree in Library Science from the Davis College of Library and Information Science at the University of South Carolina. He has ten years experience as a professional librarian. His lib... View profile
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9 Comments
Post a CommentWell written sonnet :)
Lovely.
Thank you for your comment and for taking some time to read me.
So when you get the $100 prize, you wanna share?
Awesome sonnet
This is a perfect sonnet! Great job :)
Wow, and I think you've even got the iambic pentameter spot on as well.
very nice!
Beautifully written Doug...joy to read.
absolutely wonderful, Doug, and perfect. 5 stars!