If You Weren't that Far.

mimpi
If you weren't far
I would have hold you mush tight
Till our hearts breathe one

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Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest.  View profile

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  • Donald Pennington6/2/2009

    I would hold you too. Ay man who doesn't thik you're amazing is a fool.

  • J L Carey Jr5/14/2009

    This is a very elegant haiku mimpi.

  • Donald Pennington5/6/2009

    Oh you and me would be SO much trouble. Why don't you come to the US?

  • C. McKittrick5/4/2009

    I STILL need smileys;-)

  • Shirley Mandel5/3/2009

    Oh the longing of love! Very well expressed here.

  • Teresa Mahieu5/1/2009

    good one mimpi :)

  • Viktorya Hale4/30/2009

    Lovely Haiku :)

  • J P Whickson4/29/2009

    Great poem.

  • 3lilangels4/29/2009

    short and beautiful to the point!

  • mayka4/29/2009

    Short and sweet.

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