I'm Going to Do Things to Your Mind

Robin Jessie-Green
I'm going to do things to your mind

Straight up and down and all around inside

Your mind is prime for function

Absorbing and learning, deflecting interruption

No outside influences distracting your mental view

It's all about you

And the things I will do

I'm going to do things to your mind

Now pay attention

I'm about to get inside your head

And once inside

I will implant and embed

seeds of fruition

Igniting sparks in your brain

Stimulating the pulsating blood

flowing through your veins

Don't be embarrassed

It's okay

I'll take it really slow

I known you'll engulf more of me this way

Reaching the peak of a series of spasms

Your mind will shiver and quiver

From a mental orgasm

And when your thoughts are thoroughly developed

I'll begin again

You'll beg me to stop

but it will never end

Taking you to a pleasure zone uncharted and previously unknown

inside of you

I'm going to do...

things to your mind

Like so many before you and so many after you

You can't ever get enough

Don't you know

people have been killed over this stuff

And when you're contemplating

It'll be me you're retaining

I'll be waiting

I'm knowledge you see

If you absorb me

I will always stay

I am information

and will never go away

So let me in

So I can begin

I'm going to do things to your mind

Published by Robin Jessie-Green

Learning is what I do best. Writing is simply the avenue I have chosen to become a career student. Everyday, I am learning how to hone my craft. Find more of my writing here: Philadelphia Early Childhood...  View profile

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  • Tja1/24/2010

    Wow This was all kinds of sexy. It takes real confidence to even feel like you can bring someone to that level. lucky you...

  • Anonymous1/10/2009

    im feelin this

  • A.M. Morgan12/10/2008

    An intellectual orgasm. :-)

  • Tammy G12/4/2008

    Cool poem - great work! Thanks for the comment too. :)

  • MrA.Cartwright12/3/2008

    Wow. Post reading this, my mind now seems so empty and "new"; unused, and wanting things to be done to it.

  • Nate'12/1/2008

    You nasty girl in an innocent non-perverse way. LUUUUUUV IT

  • Simone Hardy12/1/2008

    You are so naughty with knowledge lady. Great stuff. LOL.

  • Gary "The G-Man" Toms12/1/2008

    Okay, it's official. I need a COLD SHOWER!!!! (LOL) Excellent poem by an obviously gifted writer. By the way, I think I understand why you wanted me to read it. You must have seen some of the comments posted on my page regarding one specific article. If this is that case, thank you very much! You're right! They can't handle it because.......I did something to their minds.

  • bw Frampton11/29/2008

    Damn...that was some kind of alright! LOL
    Really enjoyed the poem. Very good!

  • jcorn11/26/2008

    P.S. I confess that my husband had some input in that last comment but I agree with every word he said - and waited till he left the room to write it :)

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