Before you scrap your latest writing project because you can't figure out why no one's getting into it (it's the greatest story *ever*, after all), try taking a look for paragraph bloat.
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Published by Phebe A. Durand
A journalist turned instructor who decided that a steady income wasn't worth creative frustration, Phebe Durand (Lolaness) now focuses on ways that technology can enrich our lives, her works range from writi... View profile
