In Flight

Dr. Jamie Yvette
What a breathtaking sight

the day you took flight;

no longer afraid to try,

you gave it all of your might.

Your little wings were frail,

but your determination was strong.

And now you soar through the sky,

some journeys short, and others long.

You have the freedom to fly -

no need to wait in line.

Embrace the aerial magic of life

one beautiful trip at a time.

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  • Orchiolum3/1/2008

    Ah, beautiful description of another part of Life's rhythm.

  • Donna Porter2/14/2008

    This is a fantastic poem...inspirational and bittersweet. I didn't originally take it as a "parental poem" but in that light it's even stronger.

  • Adam Michael Luebke2/12/2008

    I very nice poem -- like a subtle white tea with a hint of berry blossom. Poignant, and delicate.

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA2/6/2008

    Very Nice, once again.

  • A.M. Morgan2/6/2008

    Beautiful. I love the picture.

  • Sharie C2/4/2008

    I love this poem. It's beautiful!

  • Josienita Borlongan1/30/2008

    This is a very beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing!

  • Dr. Jamie Y. Marable1/28/2008

    Thanks everyone! I wrote this poem as well as "Parental Love" as a tribute to my stepchildren; hence, the same photo was used for both entries. It is a bittersweet time when a parent comes to the realization that their children are no longer "children" but rather, young adults!

  • mwtsaginaw1/28/2008

    This is really nice, Jamie, I just waited a day to read it because that other one sort of scared me! -- Mike

  • Charles Reynolds1/27/2008

    Awesome. Loved it. Such a way with words.

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