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  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock4/28/2008

    I love this one so much!!!!!

  • Cynthia Martin4/27/2008

    great poem!!! Cyn

  • Christine Bruness4/27/2008

    Yes! good for you for still crusading on and going about your day, despite the hurt. I like how you used an image that commonly is used to show goodness as a source for your pain. Unique work here.

  • Puddle Jumper4/27/2008

    Nice poetry.

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI4/27/2008

    Fine way of narration.

  • Harold Sink4/27/2008

    I feel like this too when I wake up.

  • Mr. New Material4/26/2008

    beauty line for line

  • PenPress4/26/2008

    Nice poem!.............I like the way you express yourself but don't play with too sharp an object!.................

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