Invisible Stars

(a Haiku)

Lisa R. Strong
Tiny points of light;
Hidden by the winter clouds;
Moon shines from behind;

Published by Lisa R. Strong

I was born and raised in Binghamton NY. I have been writing short stories since I was eight years old, and poetry since I was a teenager. I also write prayers, meditations, and opinion articles. My dre...  View profile

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  • cathiesbloggs3/7/2008

    Beautiful !!!

  • K. Jai Estes2/27/2008

    Gorgeous! I love this one too!

  • Justice Lives Not2/25/2008

    Excelent.

  • Harry Gunawan2/24/2008

    I can feel your haiku Lisa. The image printed in my mind. Great haiku for once more! :-)

  • Karen2/23/2008

    Very nicely written Lisa; and a metaphoric third line, which raises Haiku to its highest level. Well done.

  • Chet Harlow2/23/2008

    Amazing how so few words can paint a full picture.

  • 3lilangels2/23/2008

    very beautiful and picture is delight!!!!!

  • mimpi2/22/2008

    So picturesque!

  • Steven West2/22/2008

    Very pretty and I love the photograph.

  • Mary E. Coe2/22/2008

    Very nice good job.

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