It's Not that Cold Outside

Mag Inzire
It's cold outside, so cold.
I want to do it, but yet I feel so cold.
I want to do something it's what I should do.
I hear a noise a car maybe.
No I would be to slow but I want to do it.
It's just so cold.
I'm thirsty, but it's all ice no water.

Am I making a good choice if I don't do it?
Oh alright I will do it.
She will eventually come and look for me.
Maybe she will have the leash this time.
I hate it when she pulls me by the collar.
I find the noise. I chase it.
Suddenly it's not so cold outside.

Published by Mag Inzire

Mag is a Physician Assistant working at a local community hospital in NY. Married and a mother of four she takes pride in educating on health and wellness, but also enjoys sharing real life experiences and e...   View profile

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  • Kerry 3/8/2008

    That's really cute, I love poetry

  • Penny Molinario 2/12/2008

    Hey, you must be reading my German Shorthair Pointer's mind! This describes him perfectly. :)

  • dormetheus 2/10/2008

    I would be excited about a leash too!

  • Dissonance 2/7/2008

    I should have known better than to click on this. I had just warmed up with a cup of tea, and now I'm shivering again! hahaha... I'm only teasing... this was very clever. You have an interesting point of view!

  • Tina 2/7/2008

    Very cute!

  • Carol Wilkins 2/7/2008

    Very cute & creative! I love the point of view!

  • R. Elizabeth C. Kitchen 2/6/2008

    I enjoyed this very much!

  • jcorn 2/6/2008

    So funny, didn't get the point of view immediately but when I did, I was charmed!

  • Ryanick Paige 2/6/2008

    Oh how sad.

  • Katy Berezny 2/6/2008

    lol poor pooch :)

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