John's First Day at Work

This is a Short Story in Response to Karen's Sanders Writing Challenge

Tony Payne
John had butterflies in his stomach as he hurriedly got ready to head out of the house.

This was his first day at his new job, and it wasn't exactly what he had been looking for, but beggars can't always be choosers can they.

The office was located on the wrong side of town, a drive that was more miles than he would like, but this morning it was at least a smooth commute, and he hoped that he could show that he was well capable of doing the job.

He liked the people that he was going to be working with, but at the same time John knew from the interview that it was going to be hard to get on with his boss.

This was a person who as far as he could tell was a self indulgent extrovert, who also apparently didn't use deodorant, which was easy to tell because he smelled rancid, the kind of body smell that made you squirm.

Still, a job is a job, and John put a spring in his step as he walked through the doors of the office on his first day.

This Is An Entry For Karen's Writing Challenge

The challenge is to write a short story that uses all of the following words, without changing them in any way:

Indulgent Squirm Rancid Extrovert Wrong Miles Butterflies Capable Smooth Hurriedly

You can read more about Karen's Writing Challenge HERE

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Published by Tony Payne

Tony Payne is a freelance writer who lives on the South Coast of England with his wife Debbie. He has worked in the IT Industry all his life, and has been writing on various sites for the last 10 years. T...  View profile

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  • Patricia Sicilia10/4/2010

    I want the rest of it ....

  • Rhonda ODonnell10/3/2010

    Great article. Thanks

  • Judy Kaelin10/3/2010

    You did a great job on this challenge!

  • Jennifer Bove10/3/2010

    great one

  • Bonnie Doss-Knight10/2/2010

    It totally amazes me that you can take words like that and spin a yarn. Have much emphathy for poor poor John. See - you made me believe.

  • Tony Payne10/2/2010

    It is more or less the same as your tell me a story Abby. Always fun to write.

  • Abby Greenhill10/2/2010

    Sounds a lot like my 'tell me a story'....interesting.

  • Mae Wong10/1/2010

    I loved that you used rancid to describe body odor, it reminds me of the gym. Great job!

  • Malina Debrie10/1/2010

    I will pass on the writing challenge, but you did a good job!

  • Nancy G in Tennessee10/1/2010

    wow! that's a story, Tony!

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