Jumping Through Hoops

Jill P. Viers
This is a poem I wrote in college. I was feeling burnt out and confused at the end of the four years. I just felt like I hadn't accomplished anything or that I hadn't put myself in any better position than I was in when I started. This poem also reminds me of how outspoken I was then without worrying about it.

Another day; another test to pass

Wondering if this piece of paper

Is worth the last four years of my life

Jumping through hoops

Another judge to impress

Trying to get into things I should...

And stay out of things I shouldn't

Climbing the corporate ladder

That never seems to end

While the corruption and capitalism

Stay right on my heels

The hoops don't ever bend or break...

They catch and remember every mistake.

Published by Jill P. Viers

Jill is a technical writer, instructional designer, article writer, and creative writer. Her articles focus on business, education, parenting, cooking, entertaining, politics, and more. She also writes and p...  View profile

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  • John Smither12/30/2008

    :) another very good poem from you, I really did like this.

  • Jennifer Wagner12/23/2008

    The poem was great, but your line, "This poem also reminds me of how outspoken I was then without worrying about it" also really spoke to me. I wonder why we censor ourselves more as we get older? I'm glad I'm not the only one that tends to do it. ;-)

  • Darin Tripoli12/22/2008

    very nice d:)

  • Kofi Bofah12/20/2008

    jumping through hoops...

  • Kay Whittenhauer12/20/2008

    Today, your comment "This poem also reminds me of how outspoken I was then without worrying about it." really strikes me. That's enough fuel for another poem right there!

  • Cathy A Montville12/19/2008

    But you did it!!!! I believe we jump through hoops for most of our life...sad but true! You were very together in college judging by your writing!

  • Lisa Riggs12/19/2008

    Love this...especially the ending....great poem Jill!

  • 3lilangels12/19/2008

    I really like this!!!!!

  • Heather Carreiro12/18/2008

    The tone reminds me of Maya Angelou's "Harlem Hopscotch," always jumping and trying to keep on keepin' on. Great job.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.12/18/2008

    I love those last two lines! Wonderful work. :-)

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