Just 24 Hours

Jolynne M Hudnell
Just 24 hours from the time
I became yours
I gave myself fully
Completely to you
And now you've been taken

Just 12 hours from the time
A future agreed
Promises of forever
Nevermore to be
You've been taken from me

Published by Jolynne M Hudnell

Jolynne is a part-time freelance writer and independently-published poet. Jolynne has knowledge and experience in a variety of topics. Jolynne enjoys singing and writing poetry. Her published work in...  View profile

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  • Joan Haines12/19/2010

    Very sad.

  • Donald Rothra12/15/2010

    Heart wrenching.

  • Freida Thomas12/14/2010

    sad yet so true to life

  • Jack Wellman12/13/2010

    What a vicious turn of events that time can do. So much in such a short time. I think anyone with emotions can identify with this classic work friend.

  • rmharrington12/13/2010

    Both my daughter and my son loss a child at birth. Such pain always lay near to the heart, healed perhaps, but never forgotten.

  • Delicia Powers12/13/2010

    So sad and heart-felt!

  • Tony Payne12/13/2010

    Great poem, so very sad.

  • Sherry Tomfeld12/12/2010

    Great poem! Thanks for sharing it with us.

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