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  • Kristie Leong M.D.3/3/2008

    I love the imagery of the dust exploding. Great job!

  • Harry Gunawan1/6/2008

    Dust explodes...wow, makes want to reread this again and again.Great job!

  • Kady Burney12/14/2007

    I so can't wait for more haikus!!! I really liked this one and am hoping for more!!!

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