Kentucky

Orchiolum
From ancient blue ranges
smoke and mist curled upward
with an early morning chill.

Buzzards circled hollars,
barns weathered and crumbled
beneath the song of the whippoorwill.

The sun melted the highway
into long, shimmering black mirrors
as tobacco swayed with Summer's tease.

The farmer's hand and the salesman's pitch
changed landscape and time,
bringing memory to it's knee.

Old men and country boys,
southern belles and roads winding
forever through the spell.

Jack rocks and shadowed creeks
glimmered beneath the moon
when Grandpa's store had love to sell.

These memories dance, and whisper,
among the rolling valleys
below the cedar dotted hills.

At night, the stars did sparkle
beyond the deep and silent sky.
For me, they sparkled till.

Published by Orchiolum

Progressive, tree hugging, Earth loving free thinker. When I see the Royals I am reminded of a world in need.   View profile

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  • Sherri Granato 8/17/2011

    Your imagery is just spectacular! We are plannining a trip that includes visiting Kentucky in October. After reading your tribute to the state, I am now looking forward to it.

  • Delicia Powers 5/30/2011

    My, you astound me, amazing poetry, please write more...

  • pamela smith 5/28/2011

    Perhaps my family's mountain???? Well done.

  • Deb Martin-Webster 10/30/2010

    I love this poem. Excellent work!

  • Opal Auda Love 8/29/2010

    Beautiful poem, realistic imagery. I live in Kentucky and you just described my home with a few fabulous words.

  • Paul Rance 2/15/2010

    Very evocative indeed. Beautiful scenery! No Kitebird?...

  • RM Gal 10/2/2009

    I am there. Thank you for the experience.

  • Walton S. Tissot 6/27/2009

    Will always be my true home. Great poem! I have a work in progress of KY poems; just don't wanna rush.

  • Lucky M. Diaz 10/3/2008

    Wonderful imagery and description of Kentucky!

  • Deborah Goulekas 6/11/2008

    I could see myself living in a beautiful forest setting . . . I feel displaced in Southwest Florida. Your poem is lovely!

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