Kunoichi

Deceptive Alluring and Venomous

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Using feminine charm

She was always effective

By her beauty and grace

Men fell victim

She was always effective

Using what she had

Men fell victim

On the surface, she was a bookish nurse

Using what she had

Beneath, she was a sable kunoichi

On the surface, she was a bookish nurse

A skilled handmaiden

Beneath she was a sable kunoichi

Deceptive, alluring and venomous

A skilled handmaiden

Well versed in chemistry

Deceptive, alluring and venomous

She nursed with an angel's touch

Well versed in chemistry

Her potions were lethal

She nursed with an angel's touch

Wearing thick glasses and a ponytail

Her potions were lethal

When she administered them

Wearing thick glasses and a ponytail

She was an antithesis

When she administered them

The medicines made her patients better

She was an antithesis

A healer and a killer

The medicines made her patients better

Her arsenal made men suffer

A healer and a killer

On a clandestine mission

Her weapons made men suffer

She was fierce

On a clandestine mission

By her beauty and grace

She was guardian of the realm

Using feminine charm

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  • Harry Gunawan1/23/2008

    Wow, I'm so late reading this! You just started a cool chronicle with a very interesting character! A new action hero has just born! Congrazt! :-D

  • Kady Burney1/3/2008

    Sorry, hun, I came back for a third read! People NEED to see this poem!!!! This is GREAT!!!! I'm sorry to comment and bug you so much about this, but this is an excellent poem!!!!! truly, I mean this, this one is a masterpiece of all masterpieces! I love how you talk about her "arsenal....using her charms....potions!!!!" GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Kady Burney1/3/2008

    I've got to comment on this again. I think you're writing has always come from the heart, but this is really an awesome poem. You are breaking all the molds with this one, and I just wanted to tell you that I will like whatever you write, because it is good. You words are always well-woven and the images are always intense, but YOU REALLY CAUGHT ME WITH THIS ONE!!!!!!! Again, great job!!!! I wish I could rate higher than 5, I really do!

  • Kady Burney1/3/2008

    OHMYGOSH!!!!! You must know how much I love this! WOW!!!!!!!! This sounds something like Sun Tzu's Art of War! How cool is that???? You are such a great writer. I love the parts, "clandestine mession, guardian of the realm,thick glasses and a pony tail!!!!"
    WOWEEEE!!!!! YIPPEEEE!!!! This one is my absolute favorite. I swear to it. I love all you other works, but I gotta be biased, you touched my heart and sould with this one!!!!!!!!!! 5 outta 5!!!!!

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