Land Mines

A Rhyming Prep to Watch Your Step!

Linda Ann Nickerson
There is an eagle in me
that wants to soar,
and there is a hippopotamus in me
that wants to wallow in the mud.

Carl Sandburg
(1878 - 1967)

We live beside a danger zone,
So watch before you tread.
And when the grass is overgrown,
The obstacles embed.

Bare feet are not advisable,
As everybody knows,
And things unrecognizable
May seep between your toes.

We live out in the countryside,
Where animals are found.
So watch before you slip and slide
And step over that mound!

Published by Linda Ann Nickerson - Featured Contributor in Lifestyle and Sports

Linda Ann Nickerson brings decades of reporting and a globally minded Midwestern perspective to a host of topics, balancing human interest with history, hard facts and often humor.  View profile

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  • 3lilangels3/7/2008

    very cute here, fun poem!!! i am subscribing to you, i really enjoyed your work

  • Missy H.3/5/2008

    Cute! Love the quote by Carl Sandburg

  • Lori Piper3/5/2008

    loved this

  • Yeshuan3/4/2008

    LOL! That is too cute! A poem about poop! Mike Rowe would be proud!

  • Charlie K3/4/2008

    wonderful.

  • Michael K. Miller3/4/2008

    I love the title and subtitle (and the whole poem .. smile). Very effective verbal/visual integration... "Exploding" cow pies should be avoided... Write On, Michael

  • robritt3/4/2008

    Interesting poem and very good idea. We neever know what lays beneath the grass and soil, do we?

  • Aly Adair3/4/2008

    Wonderful thoughts.

  • Kady the Hippie Woodstock3/4/2008

    This is a great poem and Carl A. Sanburg is one of my favs!!!!! 1000000000000000000000 stars!

  • J. E. Davidson3/4/2008

    How cute! With three dogs, you could also be describing my back yard!

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