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  • poddys1/16/2010

    That is really cool, well done Rox.

  • M. M. Rooni1/8/2010

    This is SO true. Rox you have a gift.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick1/4/2010

    this is a truth of life as much we we try to grasp the sand in our grip it'll slip away...let it b free n it shal remain wid u...wonderful poem!!

  • Laura Rousseau1/3/2010

    Short and powerful, great job!!

  • Angel Vee1/3/2010

    Love this!

  • Thomas H Forthe1/3/2010

    Happy New Year, Rox!

  • B.J. Rychener1/3/2010

    rox u can revisit anytime!!! c i do too :) still loving this one

  • Jack Aiello1/2/2010

    Eloquent and simple - some of the best poems are like that. Nice job!

  • B.J. Rychener1/2/2010

    very powerful... and true

  • J.C. Grant1/1/2010

    Good work, Rox.

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