Listen for a Breeze

A Haiku

Louisa Burgess

Stillness becomes you
the heat is one hundred six
listen for a breeze

Published by Louisa Burgess

Life long NYer. Expressing myself through the written word has been my lifelong hobby and vocation. Somehow I managed to raise two sons and actually worked for a living! Recently moved to Texas!Louisa Burges...  View profile

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  • Momma J8/6/2008

    106? That's insane! Great poem.

  • 3lilangels8/6/2008

    Awesome haiku, very few words, but simply pure!!!!!!

  • Restaurant Chef8/6/2008

    =)

  • William Mattingly8/6/2008

    Thats amazing how in just a few lines, you managed to make me actually feel like i was there.

  • janet Trieschman8/6/2008

    nice. you can feel the experience just reading your haiku

  • Tony Vega8/5/2008

    Hot haiku ;-)

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky8/4/2008

    Great haiku.

  • Kay Whittenhauer8/4/2008

    :-) It reminds me of something my grandmother would have said to us....

  • Morton Templeton8/4/2008

    Nice haiku

  • PenPress8/4/2008

    I can feel the nice breeze !

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