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Tina Twito

A hint of steak
is hanging in the kitchen air,
another layer as the
coffee voices its descent
into my cup--
familiar bitter-sweet
across my tongue.

Last night
a bead of sweat
ran down your neck
unchecked.

A shuttered thrill
ran through me
analyzed, rebuked,
dismissed. . .

as I plugged my wrist
into the vast machine
and clicked.
An IV drip...
Life is weird.
IKR?

Maybe you are
sitting there
somewhere,
A tinge of smoke
is lifting from your
touseled hair.

I reach and
pick the cat hair
from your shirt,
with a lifting
three-note giggle
and a sigh.

You cough a bit
and shake your head .
With crooked grin,
you chuckle,
and I see the
"this again"
reflected
in your eyes.

You shiver
in the cold. . .

But maybe not.

I guess
I'll never know.

Funny,
I can almost
now believe
you're really
real,
as I free fall
once again
into this sea
of empty arms.

TTYL
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Published by Tina Twito

I'm 39, with a wonderful husband (in Iowa), and a daughter who lives in NC with her hubby (love them both!). I write mostly children's stories and poetry (rhyming poetry, traditional poetry, haiku, but mostl...  View profile

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  • Grace Anne Carey10/13/2011

    I love this stanza, "A shuttered thrill / ran through me / analyzed, rebuked, /dismissed. . ." I can almost feel that suspenseful thrill underlied by that sinking feeling that I'm doing something wrong that comes with meeting people online when I read this :)

  • Shirley A Mandel10/4/2011

    A stunning expression of cyber isolation. This was my concern way back in the 1970s when these machines were first proposed. And we are there now. A guy friend of mine never leaveshis apartment now, except to get food. All his "lovers" are online.

  • Sivaramakrishnan Ananthanarayanan9/24/2011

    Quite an unique effort, Tina - siva

  • Bethany R. Marsh9/22/2011

    Excellent poem!!

  • RipDiction9/21/2011

    "plug my wrist into the vast machine" that's an awesome analogy ty

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky9/21/2011

    Wow. Wonderful!

  • Mindy Mai9/21/2011

    Great poem, thanks.

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