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Long, Long Winter

When the Darkness Seem so Long . . .

Debby Alten
Staring at the sunrise
Driving on the road again
A freezing winter morning
Starts my day

I tried to read your Word
But I couldn't feel a thing
When I talk to you
You feel so far away

Sometimes I feel like crying
Like I'm sleeping or I'm dying
Like a barren tree
That's trapped beneath the snow

It's a long long winter
And I'm reaching out to you
It's a long long winter
And the sun is shining through
Summer has gone a long time ago
And I thought it was gone for good
But springtime is coming
Springtime is coming

(adapted from lyrics by Michael B. Alten)

Published by Debby Alten

Debby is a member of the SGV Inklings writing group and co-partner of G8 Press http://www.g8press.com. She's been published in "The Upper Room" magazine as well as her local newspaper.  View profile

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  • Been there.1/18/2010

    What a beautiful poem. I've just come through about 10 years where God seemed so distant...so I know what that feels like. Valleys can be very, very long sometimes and it's hard to see the other side. Springtime came this fall for me with a sudden "thaw." I hope your springtime comes soon.

    (If you'ld like to read some other poems on this topic, I collected some I found early on in that 10 years here: http://poetry.windhavenweb.com/themes/0103.html

    Could I add this poem there? You can write me at ecarian at yahoo dot com

  • B.J. Rychener12/16/2009

    what a beautiful poem debby

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