Look Away

Carmella Mae Dunkin
Today has all gone astray,

look away, just look away,

I had no clue, what to say,

just look away, look away.

Oh how odd I want to say,

but instead I only look away, look away.

There is no meaning to this day,

so all I can do is look away, look away.

Tomorrow is close not far away,

so look away, look away,

from this dreadful aweful day.

Look away, look away.

Published by Carmella Mae Dunkin

Carmella Mae Dunkin is a photographer, writer, singer, artist, web designer, wife & mother of 8. Carmella loves singing, photographing everything she see s, writing, (including plays and skits), designin...  View profile

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  • Kristie Leong M.D.3/11/2008

    Beautifully written. :-)

  • Butterfly2/4/2008

    Very thought provoking, and you're right - God-inspired!

  • Carmella Mae1/24/2008

    Katy, I like that, that would have made a perfect last line! Thanks for reading!

  • Katy Berezny1/24/2008

    Tomorrow is not too far away! :)

  • Linda Ann Nickerson1/20/2008

    Sometimes . . . looking away . . . and moving on . . . are the best one can do!

  • jcorn1/20/2008

    This one truly resonated with me. I understand about the need to look away, having no choice, sometimes. And then you move on....to the next day.

  • compuwise1/14/2008

    Look away Dixie Land?

  • Victor T. Chambers1/14/2008

    Thoughtful.

  • Nick Poma1/13/2008

    I like it very much. I feel that way some times.

  • Mike Spain1/13/2008

    nice poem!

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