Lost

Charlotte Kuchinsky

Lost in space
And lost in time.
Lost in reason.
And lost in rhyme.
Lost forever
Deep in our sin.
Lost in the pain
That lies within.

So many lost.
So little time.
That we don't care
Is the real crime.
There's no kindness.
Or sympathy.
We're all just lost;
Both you and me.

Published by Charlotte Kuchinsky

I'm an author, columnist and poet. I have done extensive business, creative and technical writing and written curriclum for high schools, colleges and universities. I am currently the principal writer for a...  View profile

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  • Kim Keason3/3/2011

    Your poetry seems to be getting darker. I hope everything's OK and you're just getting some feelings out.

  • Delicia Powers3/3/2011

    Very beautiful and powerful!

  • Bridget Ilene Delaney3/2/2011

    Wednesdays are now a one list my five list (http://www.listmyfive.com/bridgetidelaney) day (and it doesn't make much money, but I appreciate views of my lists if you have the time) and then returning comments day - I'll catch up one of these days, I just don't know when!

  • Candice L. Collins3/2/2011

    so many are lost and time keeps speeding up!

  • Linda Louise Johnson3/1/2011

    I was feeling so saddened by this, until I read Mike's comment. Rejoice!

  • Lorena Richie3/1/2011

    very good :)

  • Lori Gunn3/1/2011

    excellent work, thanks for sharing ♥

  • Carol Roach3/1/2011

    truly excellent

  • Laura Cone3/1/2011

    excellent

  • Sophie S3/1/2011

    What an interesting poem, Charlie. There are a lot of ways to interpret this. I thought of people who are "lost" when they suffer from dementia or some other illness.
    Sophie

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