Lost Friendship

Louisa Burgess
My friend you're gone
our friendship wasn't meant to last
for me it was one thing
for you quite another

Losing a friendship
isn't as hard as losing a marriage
or a family member to disease
or worse to death

The loss of a friendship
is after-all one of life's natural occurrences
like leaves turning brown and
eventually falling from a tree

We say things in friendship
sometimes misunderstood or felt sharply
your friend says you should know it hurt
you didn't mean for it to

Friendship that sits on the edge
wasn't the friendship you thought
it's gone with the wave of a hand or worse
with a silence that speaks loudly

That lost friendship
feels like a death cold and shivering
down below your heart where
their used to be a warm comfortable place

Published by Louisa Burgess

Life long NYer. Expressing myself through the written word has been my lifelong hobby and vocation. Somehow I managed to raise two sons and actually worked for a living! Recently moved to Texas!Louisa Burges...  View profile

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  • RM Gal4/3/2009

    Beautiful expression.

  • Branwen663/22/2009

    Been there, I so relate to the sentiments you very beautifully express...

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper3/22/2009

    Sad, well written :) Sheri

  • 3lilangels3/17/2009

    sad hugs!!

  • Kay Whittenhauer3/15/2009

    "The loss of a friendship is after-all one of life's natural occurrences like leaves turning brown and eventually falling from a tree." I've never really looked at it that way... that's a helpful insight.

  • Momma J3/15/2009

    Wonderful poem. It catches the essence of acquaintances who are friends. I consider true friends ones that you can say anything to and everyone seems to rebound from the rocky spots. Hope all is well and glad to see you are back with some more of your awesome work.

  • Linda StCyr3/14/2009

    sad

  • mimpi3/14/2009

    Friendship lost is breath lost and I have been there. Love yo dear. You take care.

  • Nancy Tracy3/13/2009

    Louisa, this poem was filled with beautiful imagery and emotionally truth. I have suffered such losses of friendship and know well the feeling.

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