Lost - A Poem About Lost Love

Fals
A written letter was sealed with a kiss, was lost in route and will be missed

She sits by the phone in hopes to hear his voice, Till this day still drawn to him was never her choice

Still looks at the pictures and thinks of memories past, The pictures are faded no longer recognizes her laugh.

Still cannot pinpoint where exactly everything became so blurred, There was a time when nothing seemed to be slurred.

Misses his input, his eyes and profound smell, She lies to herself and tells everyone that all is well.

Because this girl really does desire, To once again feel true loves fire.

To have that yearning sensation from a gentle mans touch, To be able to say that I love you so much.

Never at night will she need to hide her tears, Be able to voice all of her fears.

To have him tell her that everything will be fine, And her to know that it's not just a line.

All she really needs is for someone to make her feel secure, Because the last guy made her feel unsure.

Would put her down and always tell her lies, And he never felt sorry for making her cry.

This woman does have so much love that she wants to give, Without any love she feels as if she cannot live.

She have never really felt like she has been complete, A hole in her heart that she hopes someone can delete, She always felt for your love she needed to compete.

And than the day that crushed her world, Was the day that you said you would no longer call her your girl.

Could not understand how things had changed so quickly, Had it started when he became so picky.

When she looked in the mirror she no longer knew who she was, But convinced herself she had to be like this just because.

Nothing on the earth could ever justify what he had done, Cause it was obvious you could see the hurt even with no blood.

You slowly killed the woman that once lived inside, Which is why from love she will now always hide

Published by Fals

I am a 26 year old female who enjoys writing in my spare time. Am a single mom to a 6 year old boy  View profile

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  • Laurel1nd1/19/2008

    This is beautiful and sad; well-written to let the sorrow and brokenness show through. I suspect this is the writing of a past you, or something you feel only sometimes now. You know you are complete in yourself. This is just what I was trying to say in my poem, "A Note, Unsent." Being hurt so badly by someone you cared so much about can take a very long time to get over, and make you untrusting for an even longer time. Well done!

  • Erica Hidvegi11/28/2007

    I think the only stanza that needs cutting back or re-wording and making three sentences into two is here

    "She have never really felt like she has been complete, A hole in her heart that she hopes someone can delete, She always felt for your love she needed to compete."

    Otherwise for rhyming poetic verse this is substantial in visual weight. An anthology of your poems would be a good place for this one to be a part of.

    Good job !

    sharing the light,

    Hey are you at myLot ?

  • Girl Gone Fishing11/28/2007

    Wow! Very good poem. I actually got chills!

  • Debby Alten11/21/2007

    That's sad, Fals. But beautiful too. Keep writing.

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