Love

Jolynne M Hudnell

as i walked
the shoreline
i saw glistening
below the surface
i reached in an
drew out
warm and wet
a shard of the
shattered box
as realization
took my breath
i felt a pain
in my breast
felt a point
i reached in and
drew out
warm and wet
the same shard,
i held them up
the sun shone sheer
one shard blue
one blue smeared red
and as the sunglint
passed through
the latter
i felt a purple tear
pass my cyclic
tri-tone gaze

Published by Jolynne M Hudnell

Jolynne is a part-time freelance writer and independently-published poet. Jolynne has knowledge and experience in a variety of topics. Jolynne enjoys singing and writing poetry. Her published work in...  View profile

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  • Jack Wellman7/21/2011

    Revisiting this gem my friend. Oh what giftedness you have.

  • Robert O. Adair7/21/2011

    Well written! Very evocative! great imagery! very sad.

  • Lynn Mason7/19/2011

    wow what sad imagery, well done

  • Delicia Powers7/11/2011

    very beautiful and sad...

  • Laura Cone7/10/2011

    lovely

  • Don Rothra7/9/2011

    Image provoking.

  • Dina Montgomery7/9/2011

    Very nice... :o)

  • Orchiolum7/9/2011

    Interesting.

  • Walton S. Tissot7/9/2011

    cool! *****

  • Jack Wellman7/9/2011

    I agree, quite an original and unique work.

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