Love and Grammar Haiku Part 3

Steven West
You kiss like a fish
Precious, little similes
Like to say hello

Choppy sentences
Awkwardly you embrace me
Please don't lose your grip

Run on sentences
Like my secretive affair
It keeps going on

Bragging about sex
One mighty hyperbole
Just a hopeless nerd

Published by Steven West

I have a passion for creative writing and political discourse. Happily married for over 24 years, I have 2 children and work with special needs kids in the public schools. I enjoy making people laugh and sm...  View profile

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  • Darla Smith2/4/2011

    Great haikus!

  • Maria Roth2/2/2011

    Fun!

  • Delicia Powers2/2/2011

    very fun!

  • Nancy V Canfield2/2/2011

    Sorry I've missed a few, but I'm catching up! Fun stuff as always!!

  • Peter Flom2/2/2011

    Great stuff

  • Mike Powers2/1/2011

    A marvellously entertaining haiku series. Thanks!

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