Love Without Rhetorics
Love Because Your Really Love and You Really Do..
Don't say that I am special
Don't say that the wind would stop whispering without me
Don't say that I make you feel like all that clichéd stuffs they have to say
And then leave me
Don't surprise me when I am dead asleep with your falsettoes
Don't surprise me with cats- bring- home kind of mess
Don't surprise me with all the flowers the florist around the block has
Don't surprise me on the darkest of days with cakes and cuddles and say it is my birthday
And then leave me
Surprises do not amuse me any more
They shake me with an unexpected fear - a premonition
Love me without rhetorics, loving my normal self, making me feel like an ordinary person
Loving me because you really love me and you really do
And stay with me forever, for always...
Published by mimpi
Mimpi (Mou D) is freelance writer who writes to express her thoughts and views on this enriching journey of life. She is always looking forward to learn and share her insights while living life to the fullest. View profile
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13 Comments
Post a Comment"Forever" - isn't that what we all want - a forever kind of love. Cheers.
Very deep.
I know what you mean Janet. Thanks for your comment.
Thanks everybody for your lovely words. You are the reason......@JL: You know what that's exactly what I thought after publishing it! I just got carried away...I do all the time. LOL
Awesome. The flow is great and the way it gets you visuallising is just superb. You are indeed such an inspiration to so many Mimpi. Keep writing.
This is amazing, I love it, really love it... :o) :o)
This is a great poem. I just loved the opening. It could have almost stood alone. Just a fantastic piece.
I really think you have a wonderful gift. You are good enough to be published, in my uneducated opinion, but guessing from your work, I would say you have an extraordinary gift Mimpi! This is something special...just like the author of it is! :-)
Wow this is pure, sweet love!
Hmmm, cats - bring home --kind of mess. Dunno if I'd want someone what had to be told that to stay with me even for a little while, unless he were a cat! Then it would be fetching ;-)