Lucidly Abashed

Clearly Confused

Stormy Rayne
Lucid Speach
intractable thoughts
insurgent tears
in lifes little cachepots.
Raging emotions
unclaimed worth
addictive management
of your paramour's rebirth.
family values
modifications observed
impetuously different
our union preserved.

Published by Stormy Rayne

I write in order to say all the things in life that I can't say out loud. At times it is much easier to explain emotions in written form than verbal. Writing has been my release since I was about 11 and con...  View profile

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  • Angel Vee12/31/2009

    wow, wow, wow, nice!

  • Tricia Sabol12/30/2009

    A thought provoking piece!

  • Catherine Spencer12/30/2009

    Nice poem...relationships give us so much to write about! :)

  • Lorraine Yapps Cohen12/29/2009

    Heartfelt expression!

  • JerseyNana12/29/2009

    Yep, opposites attract! Great job, Laura!!

  • Jennifer Bove12/29/2009

    so powerful!!!

  • Michele Starkey12/29/2009

    Insurgent tears - Wow! Sure hope they're not yours! Hugs and cheers.

  • R.K. LoBello12/29/2009

    Powerful words.

  • Allana Calhoun (Tink)12/29/2009

    Ah how reflective of life that is! Clear, but confusing. Nice one!

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