After I did her brakes
I thought we were just friends
Men under cars got her going
After I did her brakes
My clothes were dirty
Men under cars got her going
Today she was thirsty
She didn't want me to shower
I smelled of oil and gas
My hands were rough
She didn't want me to shower
Called me a macho metrosexual
Blue collar type shit
Tired from using tools
Journalism degree to the side
Blue collar type shit
Flexing arm muscles
Journalism degree to the side
I thought we were just friends
After I finished the job
She sucked my dick
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5 Comments
Post a CommentRaw, unabashed... Do I sense the presence of an alter ego here? I have heard his voice in some of your earlier works and I find him to be very complex. Sometimes I am completely disgusted and offended by him (kudos to you for bring out this level of emotion in a reader), but in this poem he seems submissive and vulnerable. It almost seems as though he was wanting a deeper connection with this woman but she flipped the script on him. Either you have done a phenomenal job here or my mind is working overtime. Probably a little bit of both!
wow, did she suck it good? great work.
A very different poem to my surprise. Roberta Baxter
quite interesting, thanks!
sorry about the typo wwe should be we.