Macho Metrosexual

Blue Collar Type Shit

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She sucked my dick

After I did her brakes

I thought we were just friends

Men under cars got her going

After I did her brakes

My clothes were dirty

Men under cars got her going

Today she was thirsty

She didn't want me to shower

I smelled of oil and gas

My hands were rough

She didn't want me to shower

Called me a macho metrosexual

Blue collar type shit

Tired from using tools

Journalism degree to the side

Blue collar type shit

Flexing arm muscles

Journalism degree to the side

I thought we were just friends

After I finished the job

She sucked my dick

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  • Dr. Jamie Y. Marable12/3/2008

    Raw, unabashed... Do I sense the presence of an alter ego here? I have heard his voice in some of your earlier works and I find him to be very complex. Sometimes I am completely disgusted and offended by him (kudos to you for bring out this level of emotion in a reader), but in this poem he seems submissive and vulnerable. It almost seems as though he was wanting a deeper connection with this woman but she flipped the script on him. Either you have done a phenomenal job here or my mind is working overtime. Probably a little bit of both!

  • Janet Roof12/3/2008

    wow, did she suck it good? great work.

  • Roberta Baxter12/3/2008

    A very different poem to my surprise. Roberta Baxter

  • 3lilangels11/29/2008

    quite interesting, thanks!

  • foggynotion11/29/2008

    sorry about the typo wwe should be we.

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