Man of No Man

Cindi Starr
***This poem was written by my son when he was 19, he just turned 20. It is with his express permission that I am submitting it here on AC. He would love any feedback, as he has a compliation of poetry he would like to put into chapbook form. He writes in a kind of "Poe-esque" manner. Please share honestly.***

MAN OF NO MAN

Oh upon a gaze of stars
For man did not want to reach unto.
But one man claimed all
In his wicked grasp,
he attempted to catch them all.
He aged and died on a bed of greed,
As doth all that followed and did the same.

A Man of no Men touched them all
and spake unto them:
"For they have wasted their life to greed unto death.
But my love granted me the gift to touch all,
but never to claim as my own.

Written by Caythros Hauff 2008

Published by Cindi Starr

As a full time writer, I have a thirst for knowledge of all types. I am a published poet, and have published feature articles, and short fiction in print media. I write devotionals and historical romance f...  View profile

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  • Caythros Hauff8/20/2008

    Thank you all for the wonderful comments on this. I have a AC now and will slowly be putting more up. Thank you again and feel free to explore more of my work. ^^

  • Victoria Dawson7/23/2008

    Quite impressive. Would love to read more.

  • SAIKAT KUMAR DUTTA5/11/2008

    Very interesting piece.

  • Joshua McMorrow-Hernandez5/10/2008

    Very good work!

  • writingwhiz5/9/2008

    Nice poem and good picture too.

  • Blinkinlight5/8/2008

    This is a nice poem. Very thoughful.

  • Kassidy Emmerson5/7/2008

    Oh yes! Your son has the talent! I hope he pursues it!

  • Laura Thompson5/6/2008

    This is a good poem, your son should really join. I would definately read his things. I like his picture too :)

  • DrD5/4/2008

    Is poetry having some fun with the soul, and then expanding on that, until it becomes an emotional image of heart? -DrD

  • Lonnette Harrell5/4/2008

    I love Kahlil Gibran, and this reminds me of some of his writings. Have your son check him out. His (your son's) poem is very good, and full of spiritual meaning.

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