Mantorvilla

Patrick W. Marsh
We knew the faces, you and I,
and we knew the tongue, we knew the eye.
They're probably gone now faraway,
in some dusty corner, in an attic bay.

Mantorvilla, that was the lake, the woods, and
the old summer. It was deep within the North Woods, far from city lights,
close to the stars that beamed the living sky.
We use to go there my cousins and I, to reunite on and off,
in a brown cabin by a clear lake that sparkled and gleamed.
We started young, when the woods was long and dangerous,
until we we're old and started to have families of our own.
Then the woods changed, it emptied of the dark.
Now the cabin's empty, too complicated to resurrect,
but it'll always be full, brimming to the edge with wild memory.
None more powerful than the portraits upstairs by the fireplace.
Five portraits of the landlord and her sons.
Five portraits of young men in old dark suits, painted pale
with grimaces and wandering dark eyes.
Eyes that never truly focused on
whatever the artist demanded they focused,
so they focused on us instead.
We use to hide from them, deceive them, stalk them,
living canvas, that could reach out with a pale hand
from that glossy painted edge
and pull us into any variety of nightmare.
We played that hide seek so, we knew the best
corners, best places to be.
We knew the walls so well, every inch of them memorized
to this day, the cabin now gone or altered,
we'd still know the hiding places there
amongst the love
and dust.

Published by Patrick W. Marsh

A science fiction fantasy writer from Minnesota. Currently finishing the final draft of a novel and publishing consistently on Associated Content. Completely obsessed with creative writing and producing wri...  View profile

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  • Rebecca Tero10/26/2011

    What a lovely picture you paint in my mind! Great job! You have a gift for poetry.

  • Laura Cone9/4/2011

    neat

  • Mary Oberg8/30/2011

    What incredible memories of this place!

  • April Spencer8/30/2011

    beautiful

  • Cyn Bagley8/30/2011

    Enjoyed this very descriptive poem.

  • Lee Hansen8/30/2011

    You put me right there in the scene of your memories. Excellent work.

  • Maria Malone8/30/2011

    Vivid imagery Patrick, well done!

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