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  • Eric Martin12/28/2010

    A quietly elegant poem. Nice.

  • Deborah Oakes, NPS4/10/2010

    Awwwwww, poor moon, but you really capture the mood. Good job.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.10/28/2009

    That poor moon. Love the haiku though. :-)

  • Langley Cornwell10/28/2009

    Good one.

  • Kristie Leong M.D.10/18/2009

    Very nice. I can almost picture that moon. :-)

  • Sherri Thornhill10/15/2009

    Lovely:-)

  • Kimmie Hall10/14/2009

    That's beautiful!

  • Faith Draper10/13/2009

    Great work!

  • Tamara L. Waters10/12/2009

    Oh I love this imagery!

  • Christine Zibas10/11/2009

    This is really lovely. Too bad you didn't enter it in the Halloween Haiku contest. I love the idea of the moon watching everything.

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