Meanwhile

Walton S. Tissot
My mind was dancing
With the leaves on the trees
Outside my window
A memory

Inside
Modular American dream
Home and garden
Funny hues of greens
Of blues

My mind was dancing
The sun on the lawn
Morning and Saturday
Ready to play
A place now gone

A memory
My mind was dancing
Those funny hues
The greens, the blues;

Then the doorbell rang

Published by Walton S. Tissot

~ Walton S. Tissot is a pseudonym of William S. Tribell - *{PLEASE FEEL FREE: Anyone who enjoys the work, to Tweet, Dig, Blog, Tell a friend or anyway otherwise share and or promote it.}* - Born in America,...  View profile

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  • Nita Mukherjee3/20/2011

    Excellent imagery! Good to see you back! Thanks for your comments!

  • Charlotte Kuchinsky2/1/2011

    Wonderful!

  • Tina Twito1/25/2011

    A lovely reverie! So glad to see you back!

  • April Caudill1/25/2011

    truly beautiful:) you r great with words

  • Bethany R. Marsh1/25/2011

    Wonderful!!

  • Michele Starkey1/25/2011

    LOL - usually it's the phone for me that rings! cheers :)

  • Deb Martin-Webster1/24/2011

    Amazing piece with such visual imagery. "Morning and Saturday, Ready to play, A place now gone." Well done!

  • george chavez1/24/2011

    Oh man! This is one of your best. It almost sings. Welcome back old friend

  • Harriet Steinberg1/23/2011

    Wow, what a great poem! Yes, it's great to "see" you again Walton.

  • Nancy V Canfield1/23/2011

    Nice to have you back again, and in fine style, I see!

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