Memories of Time Past

L. Lee Scott
Long years ago
She gazed at her reflection:
Pretty enough, with
Dark eyes and soft auburn hair.

A timid smile
From one too often rebuked.
Too often falling short
Of an unattainable standard.

Unaccomplished, unfulfilled
She wonders why
When harmony is all around her
It is never within her.

She wonders why
She wakes alone.

Published by L. Lee Scott

Studied archaeology, linguistics, classical music,psychology, and beauty; worked in environmental monitoring & compliance. Love dogs and always have at least one! I'm a member of the largest national dog bre...  View profile

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  • Orchiolum5/24/2008

    Mysterious.

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI5/20/2008

    Commendable.

  • Charlie K5/19/2008

    Love love LOVE this!

  • 3lilangels5/19/2008

    What a great job, excellent!!!!!!!!!!

  • Laurel1nd5/18/2008

    Well, actually, Smorg, I was referring to standards set for her by others -- parents, teachers, siblings, friends, lovers -- but yes, herself too, and probably all unrealistic. But it happens -- hence the increasing numbers of depressed children, I think.

  • Smorg5/17/2008

    Oy! I suspect there are too many who identify too much with the lady of the poem, Laurel! Having a high standard can be such a burden, ay? (and perhaps not necessarily?) :o)

  • Secretsides5/17/2008

    You are very gifted my friend. I think that the reason she is alone is because some guys can be asses.

  • ILAKKUVANAR MARAIMALAI5/17/2008

    Excellent.

  • Stephen Joltin5/17/2008

    Another great poem. Go Laurel, you're on a roll.

  • jcorn5/17/2008

    Very evocative and layered, hooked me immediately!

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