Mental Hospital Hope

Shirley A Mandel
Cold skin

on a wet pillow-

a shadow person gyrates wildly

through a haze.

An unforgiving voice commands sleep.

Dear God

I've committed the crime

of embracing my pain.

I'll touch the Bible.

Published by Shirley A Mandel

Shirley A. Mandel is an award winning poet and the author of two books.. In addition to being a writer, Shirley Ann is a Vietnam vintage veteran and served her fellow veterans in the VA medical system as...  View profile

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  • Sheri Fresonke Harper7/30/2009

    Nice :)

  • Jennifer Waite7/19/2009

    This was obviously very emotional and personal....thank you for sharing it!!

  • andra picincu7/18/2009

    Very expressive!

  • Linda Louise Johnson7/18/2009

    Shirley, I just realized I had not been getting notices about your writing. So I came over to see what was up, and there is your striking poem. Wonderful ending.

  • Kassidy Emmerson7/16/2009

    Your ending is tops!

  • Dan Reveal7/15/2009

    I love how sincere you are with your writings..Thank you, Shirley!

  • Sheryl Young7/14/2009

    WOW - yeah - cool ending!

  • Siew Cheng Hoe7/13/2009

    love the happy ending

  • Faith Draper7/13/2009

    Good job :)

  • Carol Roach7/13/2009

    another an excellent poem, well done!

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