Moon - Poetry

Poetry

shane durbec
The moon

a smiling child in the sky

a young sphere

of isolated innocence

an infant in a swirling lake

of changing black mass

the universe.

Published by shane durbec

Writing for years.  View profile

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  • cathiesbloggs1/27/2008

    Excellent work !!!

  • Daniel Dunkin1/25/2008

    Very nice Shane, Loved it.

  • Kim Linton1/24/2008

    I love this! Excellent!

  • Will N. Stape1/23/2008

    Powerful imagery here - I'm glad I stopped by. Bravo!

  • J. E. Davidson1/23/2008

    Lovely imagery!

  • Rafael_B1/23/2008

    great poem!

  • eiffelvu1/23/2008

    I love the imagery in this poem...many thanks

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