Moving Day - a Poem

Alledria Hurt
Boxes
packed tight
taped shut
waiting.
Rooms
formerly vibrant
now ghostly
waiting.

Me waiting.

Ready?
Maybe so.
Not quite.
Waiting.
Prepared?
Physically yes.
Emotional no.
waiting.

You waiting.

Memories,
crystal clear
painfully sharp
going.
Goodbye
not given
but wanted
going.

Us broken.

Love
not enough.
Never was.
Gone.

Published by Alledria Hurt

About Me: eclectic writer of articles, reviews, and short stories; reader of everything longer than the nutrition information on the cereal box; unabashed watcher of trashy movies (some of them are actually...  View profile

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  • Kathrine Lloyd6/7/2010

    Sometimes moving sucks, other times it's a good thing :-)

  • Sue Gibson6/7/2010

    Happy pv to you.

  • John Myers6/7/2010

    Fantastic job! Great imagery!

  • Faye Fairley6/7/2010

    great poem, Alledria

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