My Ardent Wish

Deepak
I dream that

I could master

an art so that

I could mesmerize you

I could hypnotize you

I could control your thoughts

I could make you dance

to my tunes,

my efforts to

search such an art

has not yielded any results

so far, yet I have

not given up my hopes

hopefully I'll succeed

One day.

Published by Deepak

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  • Karen Chaffee10/8/2009

    How wonderfully this flows, Deepak!

  • Heather Carreiro10/7/2009

    Powerful words!

  • Preeti10/1/2009

    Amazing .. great work .. aap poet kab bane ??

  • Dina Quirion10/1/2009

    You will succeed, ...... :o)

  • Apsara10/1/2009

    Ha ha ha........then we will have to hide from you. who knows , what will be your mood and what will you make us do........lol. I wish your dream comes true but with some limits..:))

  • mimpi10/1/2009

    Have you not already!! I think, you know friends minds sometimes more than they do. And if you are hoping for that special one, keep trying. lol..

  • Sree10/1/2009

    All the best for your dreams!

  • Nora9/30/2009

    Beautiful thoughts.

  • Shaheen Darr9/30/2009

    this is beautiful, straight from the heart

  • Dina Quirion9/30/2009

    Beautiful!! I Love It!! :o)

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