My Asthma Poem
Sometimes I,m very breathless, not every one will see.
Sometimes I,m very frightened, but I try not to be.
Sometimes I,m very tired at what is going on.
I hope a cure comes soon, before I,m dead and gone.
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I am sorry to hear this, wishing you speedy recovery friend. God bless you.
Great poem - but so sorry you suffer - my brother had asthma when he was young - he was one of the lucky ones to outgrow it - but it was very frightening at times.
I SOOOOOOOO get his. I am very prone to brochitis and pneumonia and there is nothing scarier than not being able to draw a breath.
yeah just wrote this as im breathless and fed up sorry:(
I hope a cure comes soon, too. I've got two sons with asthma and it is frightening sometimes.
:(