My Dreams

Jolynne M Hudnell
Realizing that I am a hopeless romantic, and that maybe I always was but never wanted to admit it.

Failed in embodiment of logic
Awareness of so much more
Intensity in emotion prevails
Reasoning evaporated like fog
Yearning to embrace this dream

Tomorrow brings a new chance
Always felt love was not for me
Longing now to feel its sting
Ever worth it, even through hurt
Still wanting to believe in fairy tales

Published by Jolynne M Hudnell

Jolynne is a part-time freelance writer and independently-published poet. Jolynne has knowledge and experience in a variety of topics. Jolynne enjoys singing and writing poetry. Her published work in...  View profile

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  • NANCY CZERWINSKI4/4/2011

    Thanks for sharing! 5*

  • Freida Thomas1/30/2011

    Very nice work!
    Never quit believing...

  • Diane Z. Ciatto1/29/2011

    Jolynne, love your acrostic!

  • Donald Rothra1/29/2011

    We've all had dreams of fairy tales. Some get lucky and live the dream. Some don't. I'm in the latter catagory.
    Nice work.

  • Laura Cone1/29/2011

    nice one

  • Catherine Spencer.1/29/2011

    Life isn't always about fairy tales, that's for sure. But it makes me more optimistic to believe they can happen, too. Beautiful poem, Jolynne. :)

  • Jack Wellman1/29/2011

    I admire your openness and transparency for all the world to see the hurt. It makes us closer to you to know that you have nothing to hide and only to wear your heart on your sleeve. Even so, wish we and I could put some salve on the heart that seems to be breaking.

  • Delicia Powers1/29/2011

    Beautiful...!

  • Kay Balbi1/29/2011

    Love is eternally revealing

  • rama devi nina1/29/2011

    :-) Richly honest.

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