My First Poem

My First Poem

Kid-Romeo
my soul is away lying in the dark path of life for it is trapped and has outcatsed the light for it will not go into it ever again all love and hope is lost for the end is near and there is no escape love came and it left only to bring forth pain and misery for why did it love so much a love that took it to the level of pure bliss and then it went to pure pain for the heart bled and so did everything esle for that moment and then it was all over the blackness came in and the light went out for it was all over and he asked himself what is this life for and why is he alive for it is no reason to stay so he takes the last breath of life and shoots it into the distance where nothing is only the bitter sound of hate and anger and pain pure pain no one can hear no one can see no one at all only the eyes of fear for they watch as the souls life falls into the distance and into the nothing space of the end is there any remorce no for the end is here and there is no turning back he looks up and sees the face of the love his love his only love his arm reaches out to touch the face of his love but the face is quickly vanished and all that is seen is the blackness again he then see's the face again with another of a guy with his love and then they vanish but his love was sad he then runs into the other direction and tries to leave but it is too much hatred and pain there is no escape the evil has tooken over his death must now come for the end is near he sits and is all alone for he could have stopped this from happening but he didn't he made it all happen now he is lost and gone forever and so is his love, now he will be in this dark chambered room forever with no light what so ever until he is set to die but in despair it has already happend even though his poor soul is trapped and is much alive for it cannot go to heaven or hell it is trapped in the evil of hate forever for hate killed him and so did love for what truly is this life for when all it does is take u to pure pain and suffering..................................... evol is the true spelling of love.............

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I am a graphic designer, i love writing, i have a passion for poetry and have written almost 100 poems i have won 3 awards on allpoetry.com, 2 - 4th places, and 1 - 1st place, i plan on making a book soon, w...  View profile

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  • RANDY SHARPE5/10/2008

    Nice poem. I've been there. Love can feel so good. But if it ends in betrayal and deception, it can leave such a bitter and dark effect on your emotional soul. Nice write.

  • kc oregon10/15/2007

    Nice work on this poem, so heartbreaking and tragic, yet wonderfully written.

  • Shanelle Diaz10/14/2007

    Keep on writing!

  • A.M. Morgan10/11/2007

    Great for a first poem. Keep on writing. :-)

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