My God and Lord

Poem

Kady Birdwhistle
Water is dew
Which will become us at sunrise
The rain did not forget itself
Like fire it too responds
To obey the great elements
Means we owe something
And maybe the debt is here
Under conditions I find places
Of origin to hide myself
Space will always come to
Us from the outside of minds
Water is dew
I've been taught we are nothing
But open random space
Yet I cry the real tears of the sad sad me me sad sad me me
My fear is never feeling again
But I get saved from that, do you
I wish you would see the no-ears
Mentality of silence where we live
Water is us
The Lord fashioned us from
A potter's wheel of divine excellence
Sight can see and yet it can be dust
Fiery hearts are quenched
The water admires HIS walking feet
Even the losses shall SING praises
Hesitate over the simplistic
Hesitate over HIS beauty

This is a poem for my God and I just wanted to share it with you all. I care for you all so much!

Published by Kady Birdwhistle

I am a woman seeking to learn more about different writing communities while pursuing my college education. I am currently obsessed with freelance writing, Charlaine Harris (author), yoga,Christianity, Hindu...  View profile

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  • M. Eileen Burston6/25/2008

    wish you would see the no-ears
    Mentality of silence where we live
    Water is us
    this is fantastic!!!!!!!

  • Alban Mehling ;-}}>5/28/2008

    You have a delightful way of expressing yourself. Thank You fer sharin'. Mizpah. ;-}}>

  • Charlie K5/27/2008

    Lovely.

  • SFaloon5/26/2008

    Sweetie I totally get a visual of large, watery clay coated hands and a mis-shapen piece of pottery being held gently yet skillfully while being shaped for the final piece - from your words! It's beautiful!

  • Christine Bruness5/26/2008

    While I am not a religious person, I am a spiritual one and can feel your love and your desire for connectedness here. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

  • Harriet Steinberg5/25/2008

    Great poem

  • Lisa Riggs5/25/2008

    Beautiful poem...very touching my friend!!!!!!

  • Donna Thacker5/25/2008

    Kady you ARE a Poet. You have a remarkable way with words! How's the job hunting going? Pet pet pet for Midnight!!

  • Nancie Norton5/25/2008

    God loves a cheerful giver...Many people may think that sentence only applies to the money and material things that we give to him and our fellow man.....but it also applies to what we give of ourselves. And you, Kady my Dear little Sister, are always giving of yourself to others, through your words, and your actions. He has a special place in Heaven for people who give of themselves freely! Your love for God and your Fellow man shines like a bright star at night.... Don't ever change Kady Girl! God Loves You and I do too! This is an Excellent Testament for our Father. Thank you for the inspiration you always give+*+*+*PEACE on Earth

  • Lisa Renee.5/25/2008

    When we use the talents given to us by God to glorify His sacred name, He blesses us even more...God bless you little sis!

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