My Love is Dust

Dotchi Latham
My love for you I dare not breathe it
For I am not perfect in any way
I fear you will break my heart again
So my love for you, I dare not say

I know in my heart that it's over
And I know we're only friends
But I wish I could figure out
How to make you love me again

But I know it will never happen
I couldn't compete, so I departed
You crushed my spirit, wounded my soul
And left me brokenhearted.

My love for you, I dare not breathe it
For it hurts my heart to say
The man I fell mad in love with
Slowly pushed me away

I miss the man that I once knew
That guy that's hidden inside of you
That person died long ago
The one I love and I miss so.

I may still love you but I will learn
In the end I will get burned
Because what is love- only dust
Without loyalty and trust.

Published by Dotchi Latham

Latham has been writing since the age of 16 when she started writing poetry and short stories. She has written articles around the web and is honing her writing skills.  View profile

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  • R.C. Johnson12/4/2009

    Thank you for this beautifully written poem.

  • Mrs. Heart9/3/2009

    Wow! Emotional and heartfelt. Very good free flowing emotions

  • Nolan Foster8/15/2009

    Lovely, very nice. Looking forward to reading more.

  • Crystal Ray7/29/2009

    Very good. I understand this completely - especially the part about having a crushed spirit. I know that feeling all too well.

  • Sophie5/14/2009

    This is a very touching poem. If it is based on personal experience then I am sorry to hear of your relationship difficulties.
    Sophie

  • Typing for Food5/11/2009

    I'm so sorry......and this touched my heart. Big hugs to you.

  • Rebecca Wrenn4/20/2009

    Beautifully done. Very poignant, but sadly true! (^;^)

  • Sally Robertson MA, MA, LPC3/20/2009

    Very powerful and well written.

  • Christine Bruness3/4/2009

    Pure and so tender...very touching. I wish I could give you a hug and take you out for a couple drinks. Sending you some cyber cheer!

  • Samantha Vincent3/3/2009

    *HUGS* BEautiful poem...

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