My Prettiest Songs

Those Waning Days....

Dan Reveal
Hurry back and kiss me good night,
and I'll reach into the dark to find my kindest face.
The seamstress is dancing in her golden thread light,
'though her special shoes have a broken lace.

Here in your hand is placed a sleeping bird,
so tell me softly that you feel the same.
"Love is so much more than a simple word,"
said the lamb to the lion that's now become so tame.

And my prettiest songs are all about you--
those waning days of writing on an unmade bed.
I wrote you a note, but I left it at home.
Can I share my life with you instead?

So put away your hairbrush with tenderness,
and these very trees won't have to feel so lost.
My heart doth speak what my mouth can't confess,
for your love has already paid the cost.

Your love has already paid the cost.

And my prettiest songs are all about you--
those waning days of writing on an unmade bed.
I wrote you a note, but I left it at home.
Can I share my life with you instead?

Can I share my life with you instead?












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  • Lori Gunn5/19/2012

    This is so beautiful.

  • Jenny Heart4/12/2012

    You amaze me each and every time I visit your writing.

  • Bridgitte Williams11/27/2011

    So lovely...:-) BRAVO. I enjoyed this one so much. ::::applause:::

  • Kathryn E. Darden11/20/2011

    Just lovely!

  • Dina Montgomery11/17/2011

    This is beautiful Dan... :o)

  • Jack Wellman11/14/2011

    You are such a gifted man my friend. Oh, for the day I long to meet you in person brother and friend in Christ.

  • Gayle Crabtree11/14/2011

    Nice.

  • Delicia Powers11/14/2011

    Very beautiful Dan...!

  • Sunshine Wilson11/13/2011

    I enjoyed it.

  • Trisha Hodges11/13/2011

    Very sweet. Nice work.

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