My Second Message

The Spirit of Your Life

Dan Reveal
I won't say again that love will save us,
while the kitchen knife confession sits you on its knee.
How could you know that monsters can seem like saviors
in a toy store display that lets you buy one and get one free?

I can't promise that those keys are not rusty,
while your egg timer children ask for another drink.
How could you know that the stings of bees are party hat favors--
the sum total checkout crime that causes you to think?

And you'll need the grit of my second message
to help you through the melancholy one that came first.
I'd gladly be on the team that upholds the spirit of your life,
if my own spirit had not long ago died of thirst.

Sometimes the harshest words give birth in the softest places,
while you're forced to push through the supermarket line.
How could you know that a human soul doesn't just happen by accident,
but is the newborn child of Love's great design?

How could you know that a human soul doesn't just happen by accident,
but is the newborn child of Love's great design?

And you'll need the grit of my second message
to help you through the melancholy one that came first.
I'd gladly be on the team that upholds the spirit of your life,
if my own spirit had not long ago died of thirst.

{To my love...whoever it turns out to be}

{Picture courtesy of Mike Oberg}

Published by Dan Reveal

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  • Langley Cornwell2/24/2011

    Man, this is deep and mysterious.

  • Brian Schultz2/14/2011

    Great work

  • carol gibson2/12/2011

    Imagining a spirit that dies of thirst is so sad. Nice work, Dan.

  • Bridgitte Williams2/10/2011

    And..ow, lol, those last two lines deliver quite a punch. Well done. We all felt that one.

  • Bridgitte Williams2/10/2011

    ps I must say you are one of the most talented poets on this site and one of my favs. Always.
    :-) Write on.

  • Bridgitte Williams2/10/2011

    Amen. :-) Beautifully said. This poem leaves me filled with words, yet, wordless. Wow!
    Bravo. Loved the photo with. Sharp edges and soft petals...what a mix of truth. I know.

  • Mike Powers2/10/2011

    Masterful and lyrical, Dan. Thanks!

  • Tonya Hillukka2/10/2011

    You'll find her when the time is right :)

  • Tina Twito2/10/2011

    Love your poetry!

  • John Myers2/10/2011

    Well done Dan!

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