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  • Lori Piper4/22/2009

    great work

  • 3lilangels4/18/2009

    Great one!

  • Shirley Norling4/17/2009

    Good job in 5 short lines.

  • Nikki4/17/2009

    I've never heard of a didactic cinquain but your poem is right on in capturing the essence of August :)

  • Janet Hunt4/16/2009

    Very nice job on this one! :-)

  • Jon Campos4/16/2009

    Rules in poetry? That just seems wrong...looks right to me :)

  • Kay Whittenhauer4/16/2009

    Love it! (Never heard of didactic cinquain either... but who cares if it's "right" as long as it's cool!)

  • Marion4/16/2009

    I never heard of it either and I've read a lot of poetry. Very impressive!
    Congratulations.

  • Jennifer Wagner4/16/2009

    Never heard of a didactic cinquain. I do now that you've got the month of August NAILED though! It is unbearable around here.

  • Maxwell Payne4/16/2009

    Never heard of this style of poetry, but good job taking the leap and trying it.

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